Score: 1

"way to use google image search."

submission: It's Over Nine-Thousand!

date: June 25, 2008

i think the scouters can only handle numbers with up to 4 digits.
and besides that, it's a mildly catchy techno song, but these kind of videos are dime a dozen on youtube.
let's review.
Newgrounds: original flash cartoons.
Youtube: stolen anime videos.

don't mix it up.

Score: 9

"Good job, but keep working on your skills."

submission: Guitar Battle

date: June 18, 2008

i really enjoyed your Guitar Battle flash. it shows a great deal of potential.
you kind of overused the tween command, but that's forgivable. the music you chose fit the situation you put them in.
the part when the afro guy died after being hit by a water bottle didn't really have any impact to me, and even though the music went well with the scene, and you needed an excuse to do a flashback, it's almost a predictable newgrounds cliche nowadays. the contents of the flashback makes the viewer feel as if though the protagonist is going to make a miraculous comeback, so it's not really a surprise.
as for your comments in which you say you're going to make a sequel, that's not needed.
you made this for school, and it has served it's purpose. if you have the same teacher next year, taking the next level up of the same class, he won't be impressed by seeing you do the same thing over and over. you were merely demonstrating the skills you learned in his class. now you can use those skills to do anything you want. please don't limit yourself to being "that guy who animates guitarists and nothing else". use your summer vacation to develop your skills, make the kind of stuff you wanted to make during your school assignments but couldn't get away with.
or maybe if you do indeed make a sequel as you were going to do anyway, then maybe develop your established characters or introduce new ones.
keep up the good work.

Score: 10

"oh, that garfield!"

submission: Star Day: Garfield & Jon

date: May 7, 2008

is there anything that lasagna loving cat won't do for some lasagna?

Score: 9

"not bad, reminds me of the genesis version"

submission: Battle theme #16

date: January 30, 2006

of that beavis and butthead game that had music from GWAR. pretty good.

Score: 9

"sounds really megamanny"

submission: Sonic boss metal

date: March 3, 2004

sounds like a fast paced megaman X level, something like a combonation of overdrive ostrich and chill penguin or something, but i really like it. thing is, i don't like megaman X that much anymore, otherwise, i would use this in a flash.